I was surprised at how dynamic I could have been but was unable to be. I thought that the feedback I received were all helpful and none were outright wrong or silly.
I tried to be more dynamic in my presentation without being “too much.” I tried finding the right balance between making sure that the information got to the audience without being too boring.
https://youtu.be/tQfF9ne05PU
Hi Challet, after reading your post, I found that my feedback have some points which are similar to yours. I also found that I was a bit nervous when I face the camera, which limits me to be more dynamic in the video to some extent. After finding out the problem, I would try to practice as much as possible to make me relax.
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ReplyDeleteI enjoyed your second elevator pitch! I think you provided sufficient relevant information for potential customers and/or supporters. I did notice that you introduced yourself and used your notes a few times. Although I do not think these are huge issues considering this is only the second pitch, those are a couple simple fixes to address before the next pitch. Overall, I enjoyed your post!